Nate

I remember the diaper wars story, but not the frog story. Amusing bio, but work on your grammar. And what happened in between birth and 14? Tell us more!

Your grammar, I thought, is flawless and you definitely have a way of keeping the reader reading. I feel, though, the your story needs more fleshing out. The beginning is ...

LOL This is great! It's hilarious, and you set the tone exactly right for the entire story! The whole set-up seems so absolutely ludicrus, from the manner of speaking to ...

This is really quite good. The dialogue is excellent; in the beginning I wasn't too fond of it, but I grew to like it (I thought it was reading too ...

MORE! If you would like different colors for the text, just let me know. I can make up a new one with different colors within less than a minute.

Has anybody else been getting these? I keep on getting "500 Internal Server Error" and it won't allow me into the forums for hours. I'm trying to figure out if ...

Welcome Randy! How do you like the site? Joey joined for a bit too, but he posted one story and never came back.

True.. but now I actually have to look where I'm clicking to get here, instead of just clicking randomly in the top of the page without looking. :P Just changed ...

FANTA EXOTIC! AHHH.... *moment of statisfaction* I love fanta! :D :D :D Not pepsi (I do like pepsi twist though), not coca cola (I do like coca cola-light :D :D ...

Welcome to the club! If you got any questions feel free to ask me or one of the mods.

I really, really liked this story. You have a good mixture of both dialogue and description here, although sometimes it reads a bit too much like a script. You also ...

Wow... this was great. I read this a couple days ago, and it took me a while to absorb it. I highly suggest that people read this story. The opening ...

I thought this was done really well. You do a good job bringing the characters to life, and you have great imagery. To top it off, the tone in this ...

Rachel currently lives in Pennsylvania under her parents' roof, but is planning to move out upon graduation. Good luck! I plan on moving out come this fall, but the rent ...

I love mashed potatos and gravy (looks like I live in the right state, doesn't it Nate?). I live in Idaho, actually only an hour from where Nate said he ...