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Re: The Game
You really are good at flash fiction and this is the best one I've read by you thus far. I didn't spot any grammatical errors, the sentence structure is perfect, ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: The Sundial
I really liked it up to the end; your descriptions of the house and doors that don't creak anymore are very well done. It definitely instills a sense of dread ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Fast Food
lol, I like the ending; definitely puts a different spin on it. I hate fast food for all the same reasons; except that is for Popeyes, Checkers and Subway. But ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Prestige FAQ
Yep; it wasn't in the original software. It's used on some other boards, though not many. But from what I've seen it used in other places, anything from a 6 ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Seen any good...err...commercials lately?
I like the Hummer commercials. I think the cars themselves are definitely not worth the money, but the commercials for them are great.
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: DEAR MUM
woah... didn't you say somewhere that you weren't good at writing poems??? This was very powerful and written very well. Plus the shocker at the end just causes an incredible ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Gone
It sounds very repititive and very disjointed in places such as with "I stand in solitaire" and "Meaning is so apart from me." Both of those lines need some working. ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: My Existence
I thought that this was very good; definitely one of the best, if not the best, I've read by you thus far. It flows along well and doesn't sound disjointed ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: I have dreams
Too much 'me.' You should use it to end just one line, and then think up other thinks. Also, if you're gonna do rhyming then you to change the scheme ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Thank You Tessitore
Everyone who uses the Solaris template, and everyone else for that matter, should thank Tessitore for the new logo in the upper left hand corner. Instead of having to put ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Quack?
Spell incorrectly??? On purpose??? Ah well... Welcome! :)
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Newbie in need...
lol, I'm the same way, but you gotta force yourself to study... the way I do it is just to go to the library. The computers are always taken up ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Happy Holidays!
Have a wonderful Turkey Day :)
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: New Template
Just added a new template called subBlack. It's similiar to subSilver, but I think it's easier on the eyes and not quite as boring. I also deleted SteelGraphite since nobody ...
Nov 25, 2004 -
Re: Music Tastes
Right now, I listen to mostly country music and classical. I use to listen to punk, but it just annoys me now. But, my favorite music is all from the ...
Nov 24, 2004
