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I thought this was really good! The quotes and apostrophes are missing, but I think that has to do with something in the message system. I'll have to look at ...

Dialogue is really hard to do; not least because normal conversations between people sound very unrealistic when transcribed. Watch any debate show, then read its unedited transcript. The debate show ...

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What is Prestige? Prestige is a function in which you can rate users on a level of 1 to 10 (1 being low quality, 10 being outstanding) about what you ...

For now, no. But, this will change in the future.

I thought it was really good. You really love using analogies, and this is definitely the best you've used. It works out really well, and I like how you transform ...

For some reason, there's no apostrophe's. Probably a problem that occured when submitting. I like your use of comparisons and similies, but I think the poem would be more powerful ...

The 'd' in the eighth line needs to be changed to 'do.' Also, 'mmmm' sounds out place. It'd be better off as "Yum." I'm not sure what to think about ...

Another powerful poem by you... that last line is great. Only suggestion here is to take the apostrophe out of "shirt's, shoe's and tie's." It's not needed. Anyways, this is ...

I thought that this was very, very powerful. It's one of the few things I've read lately that actually caused my chest to feel like it was sinking in. Very ...

I thought this was pretty good. However, you might consider changing "have" in the fifth line to "hold" and rearranging the seventh line to "No more blue I will be" ...

I like your use of contrasting; that is, contrasting the good in the song by Louis Armstrong with the bad of what you think is wrong with the world. But ...

It sounds very broken up right now. You have one rhythym going, but then you switch to another, and then switch back. There were some particular akward lines though: "Takes ...

You can definitely post whatever you want. For a synopsis or treatment, the best forum is probably "Other" under "Stories."

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