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The Lost Years: The Musical Box

The introduction and the first chapter to what I've been writing. Looking for some constructive criticism and feedback, hope you enjoy! Personal messages are welcome!
  • The Lost Years: The Musical Box

    The Prologue and first chapter. Looking for feedback and someone to tell me if it's good or not! Personal messages are very welcome! Hope you enjoy!!

    • Novel / Chapter
    • Fantasy · Science Fiction
    10 min read


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)