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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Plasticity - part 1

    So. It's certainly been a while. This is stunning. I'll take it as a whole - The atmosphere is extraordinary, well-crafted and powerful. I want to see this in a ...

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Report A Site Bug

    Not sure if it's a bug or something, but I am unable to forward PMs? I didn't even know it was possible till today.

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: suicide in an airplane

    The simplicity reminds me of Kooser's work. It's really quite something -- encapsulating a single idea, a single theme, a single trajectory in a poem -- much like the linear ...

    Aug 20, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Written In This Skin

    Jesus, Gal. I haven’t felt more disinterested by your work before. I actually haven’t felt more shut out by any piece of writing before, and I’ve read some fairly doorslam-in-the-face ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Sparks and Rushes to the Head

    I like you when you're at your most frank, sincere; I think that is when words sing to me the most, stripped of such cumbersome prerequisites like poeticism or imagery ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Game change: to change people or environment?

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    Aug 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Movements

    I am still flying and the buildings are still very much in the clouds, thank you. And you got another thing wrong: I dislike Plato.

    Jun 11, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Poetic Neuroscience (For Kamas)

    On Your Mind Takes a while to get there, but is still madly fascinating in the meantime. Also, for anyone wondering about the scientific basis of empathy, about the most ...

    May 30, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Two Way Mirrors

    Glorious thinking. The best essays are those left unfinished -- we must speak further on this one. I see so many of our conversations running through this -- a product ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: picking oranges in Westminster, CA

    Kylan, Two things: 1) you need jazz 2) I hope you're not getting lazy Do something about the rhythm in this, because at the moment there isn't one. Navita

    May 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: hemlock

    Seph, Why are you writing this? What do you want me to get out of it? I mean that as an entirely open, curious question. I've seen this style; tried ...

    May 2, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: a love like ours is neolithic.

    anthropologist is fabulous; that ending, in particular.

    Apr 28, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: multi-verse

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    Apr 27, 2011
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    Apr 26, 2011
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    Apr 26, 2011


You must never give into despair. Allow yourself to slip down that road, and you surrender to your lowest instincts. In the darkest times, hope is something you give yourself. That is the meaning of inner strength.
— Uncle Iroh