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  • Lyrics Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody

    Well, I feel like I'm just repeating everyone else when I say this, but you KNOW it was incredibly funny. I am not a fan of reviewing lyrics, usually, because ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Other Re: 28 Questions

    Line after line of question makes each question lose its impact. I agree with Jagged, and I further think that you should take maybe two or three of those questions, ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Gigaman : A Very Bad Pun.

    Well...this was certainly another bit of light humour I've read this morning. I thought 'megaman, superman, gigaman' was a cool transition - and I'd love to see you do something ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Harry Potter & The Order Of The Pizza!

    I'm a big fan of Harry Potter - or was, a few years back - so I have to say, this is one of the funniest things I've read in ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: deus ex machina

    Hi Jagged! I'm Navita, and, I have to admit, it's been a while since I reviewed short stories, so I'm a little rusty...but I'm prepared to dive head-first in this ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: New and Confused

    Hi, I'm new too, so probably not the best person in the world to ask about this, but I'll help however I can. The points are for the comments you ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

    Hey Clo - to answer your question about Fantaise-Impromptu - here's the FIRST reason why I wrote it: because I've done this - I snuck into a uni hostel's music ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Pleasure with a purpose (Demeter's NaPoWriMo 2010)

    Here. We. Go: April 9th : he's dressed himself for years now but still gets stuck in a cardigan I love the way all of your poems begin, and this ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: he woke this morning into yellow [Hannah]

    Clo has said it perfectly - your poems ARE hard to critique, because you've written them so thoughtfully. I feel like I'd simply be repeating myself if I said I ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]

    Well. Well. Now that I see where you're getting inspiration from, I feel a bit better about reviews, which I WILL keep short and sweet, I WILL, I WILL. Right: ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: As I'm Living- Jas's PoMo thread

    Okay, I'll stop lurking and start writing a review: I have enjoyed all your poetry for its sweet simplicity. It brings up an image in my head that is at ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

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    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]

    Regarding the question of carriage...a long poem, indeed, and if I'm not careful, this reveiew could be even longer. But I'll try to be succint :) First impression? It reads ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Bubblewrapped's NaPoWriMo 2010

    Shortest review ever: I liked the sonnet because it was different - learning of love like learning knots, but I also found the idea rather...tasteless. More intellectual, I guess, and ...

    Apr 11, 2010
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Navita's NaPo Poems

    Hey Helpful - that was...have a guess...very helpful indeed. In fact, I'm going to do a rewrite right now. Just to clarify a few things: that copper sulphate crystal was ...

    Apr 11, 2010


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