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Re: Princess of the Moon
Thank you for reviewing! Your review really made me smile :) I wasn't planning on making this any longer, but I might consider it now. This only took me a ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Princess of the Moon
Thank you for your review! I'll definitely keep your advice in mind while writing, especially about showing rather than telling. As far as using names rather than pronouns, I did ...
Apr 8, 2016 -
Re: Mercenary
This is a great read. It flows well and it it overall beautifully written. The rhymes are used tastefully enough that they are noticeable but not gimmicky. Keep writing, you're ...
Apr 4, 2016