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  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    I... really rather liked this, but I can not explain why. Maybe because the imagery is enthralling or because the writing style is so amazing or because it basically sucked ...

    Nov 22, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Not Hungry

    I love the contrast between the narrative and the dialogue! However, the first sentence seems a little dry to me. I personally believe that first sentences are for drawing in ...

    Nov 22, 2007


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites