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Nefer

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Amidst the Dark, Among the Light

    I agree with Jenn on the word 'bastardised'.

    Nov 15, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Interview with a Vampire - Ann Rice

    No I haven't but if you loved it I'm sure I will to. I'm gonna search the library for it...

    Oct 27, 2005
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Innocence of a River Blossom (Short Story)

    I'll review this when I can, please try to space out your paragraphs it hurts my head to read this, probably because I wear glasses. :?

    Oct 24, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Darren Shan's Lord Loss

    I've read the first four books, and I enjoyed them.

    Oct 21, 2005
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Stop Singing- parody

    I was put off it because it said 'Backstreet Boys' but when I read it I could actually hear the song. Very nicely done. :D

    Oct 21, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Classics- Recommendations

    I never liked Greek mythology but I enjoyed reading Odysseus.

    Oct 21, 2005
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Untitled

    hurl it onto the mirror How about hurled it at the mirror ? I'm lost without Rayaan Remember what I said about you actually writing to Rayaan and how you ...

    Oct 20, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: First Snow

    I liked it but I agree with what Boni said, you could have added a few more lines. But it's still good. :D

    Oct 20, 2005
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Terry Pratchet

    I first got interested in Discworld after reading Sourcery, it was confusing at first but I got into it quickly, after that I borrowed more Discworld books. I've never read ...

    Oct 19, 2005
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Shadow Blight Chapters 5 & 6 re-formatted

    :shock: Please space out your work, it'll save me from having a headache. I'll have to read the first part before I review this.

    Oct 19, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Fallen Angel

    This was very easy to read and rhymed well. But I prefered your other poem.

    Oct 19, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Tears of the Unforgiven

    I know this is an old poem but I liked it and wanted to comment. Your rhyming made the poem flow better. The second and third stanza should be together ...

    Oct 19, 2005
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: A Perfect World

    I was thinking of the Muppets version too. Too, doesn't that mean a large amount? It can also mean also. I think someone already commented on the dialogue, it was ...

    Oct 19, 2005
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Suicide With A Butter Knife

    I'd like to hear this too! :D Very amusing.

    Oct 18, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My lips are chapped! (don't do titles!)

    I'm not too sure if this poem is about suicide? Is it? It wasn't too bad a poem. :D

    Oct 18, 2005


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien