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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Cradle of Myth

    This is a very deep poem. Obviously full of emotion, you obviously am speaking from true inspiration. That's what I love about poetry. The inspiration. You captured my attention with ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Shy Away

    Hey, nice poem. It certainly brings up plenty of sympathy, and many people can empathise with you. Try to keep a structure about the poem. Turn the lines into even ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: End Of The World

    Dedicated to my closest friend in all the world. Let me know what you think :) On the day the world falls, And the sky turns red, And the ground ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Genuine Man.

    Hey, nice poem. It's a nice change from all the poems about a guy breaking a girl's heart :P I understood what you were talking about, good descriptions. Don't forget ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: It will happen again

    I like your idea for the poem. It's quite different to all the other ones I've read lately, like a breath of fresh air. Unfortunately I have some issues that ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Jolt

    Ok, well I liked your emotion in this, very heartfelt. Unfortunately, that was about all I got from it. The paragraphs need to have a consistant technique, instead of having ...

    Aug 24, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Hang On Tight

    Hello again! :) Well in the last poem of yours I reviewed I said you could have made it a bit longer. Try not to be mad at me now, ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Patterns And Colors

    Wow. WOW. I am so envious of you. This was a great poem. I loved it. Usually I don't approve of short poems because you can never seem to get ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: From Sestina to Sestina

    The poem kept me hooked for a while, but I started to lose attention near the end. This is probably because I'm not familiar with this style of poetry. I ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: You're Beautiful

    Good poem! I liked the idea, most of the flow worked, the rythym went well. But me being the critic I am, I just have a few things to point ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: unnamed

    I really liked your poem. It had a lot of certainty in it, you obviously felt strongly about what you were saying and knew exactly how to say it. Your ...

    Aug 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mystery Man

    Well I liked the idea of your poem, but feel it wasn't presented very well. The confusion in the poem was displayed, but I felt like you were just saying ...

    Aug 22, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The Nursery

    I think you have some good ideas here, but they are hidden because of your technique of writing, which I hope to help you with :) I walk through the ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Questions and Answers Re: Strange submitting behavior

    Try contacting someone who manages the site about it

    May 20, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Name

    Can I just start by saying Sannah is an awesome name :P So I liked this poem, it touched me because you talk about how you don't feel this person ...

    May 20, 2011


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