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Thanks, guys. I will try cropping it. (And I'd love to go back and take it again.) *sighs* Oh, well.

Alright, I'll tell you... This poem is actually a reference to World War II (Hitler era)...sorry if it was not that clear, maybe I need more 'training'. I agree with ...

This is a random picture I took at my aunt and uncle's 30th wedding anniversary reception right after I found out it was real fish in the bowl. It turned ...

I've got a major case of writer's block at the moment.:( A few years ago I was so bored in Science class that I wrote a 19-page story. It was ...

Good point. I will do that.

I was Googling something about "how to privately/personally publish your book" or something like that and I got out on a tangent. (Not that I have a book to publish. ...

Yah, it's kind of a long prologue; I tried to break it off at a good place. Maybe more of a short story. (Prologue part 2) (I was trying to ...

Please scroll down a ways and ignore these parts--there's a full text below. “Little girl, would you lend your brother to me for a few minutes?” The gentle voice startled ...

Oops! Posted this in the wrong place. Am reposting in "other fiction."

“Little girl, would you lend your brother to me for a few minutes?” The gentle voice startled ten-year-old Miriam and interrupted her thoughts, which mostly consisted of how long it ...

I agree a little bit with lucky_duck about the length. It would be polite to keep it a little shorter. BUT--I read this story all at once. If someone has ...

I just want to say, don't be discouraged by criticism. I've run into it before, and it only helps you-as long as you don't let it discourage you.