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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Vampire Super Models

    Audreeyy! I've come to review your storryy!! Well. The best place to start is the beginning (unless you are telling an epic or you are watching star wars, that is) ...

    May 22, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Perlec

    I as well agree with both of the replies before this one, but something else i noticed is a small part that could be slightly confusing unless you stopped to ...

    May 19, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The girl in the background

    I really like it. It shows a lot of feeling, and you are doing well in expressing your thoughts in different ways. However, to me it seems a bit wordy. ...

    May 19, 2009


The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone