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  • Short Story » Horror, Science Fiction Re: “The Fog”

    This is a truly unique story that reminds me of a movie I watched before, which also featured thick fog and monsters. However, this story is even bolder, and the ...

    Mar 16
  • Short Story » Technology, Science Fiction Re: The World That Let Us Go

    Hello, friend. I think this is a fantastic science fiction novel. The story has a good beginning, starting with Sergei's dissatisfaction with "monotonous work", accurately portraying the image of a ...

    Mar 16
  • Poetry » Chickens, Romantic Re: The Apple Never Falls Far from the Tree- Villanelle

    Hello friend, Thank you for sharing your poem. I think you have written a very interesting and creative poem, using the metaphor of an apple and a tree to express ...

    Dec 31, 2023
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Love

    Hello friend, Your poem explores the theme of love and its negative effects on your self-esteem and well-being. You express your frustration and pain of being in love with someone ...

    Dec 31, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Your First Pain

    Hiya Ellie, I noticed a significant difference in tone between this poem and the first one. This poem is a tender and touching message of comfort and courage for a ...

    Dec 24, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Perfect In Every Way

    Hiya Ellie, I like your poem. It is a beautiful expression of love and care for a baby. You uses simple but powerful words to convey a deep affection and ...

    Dec 24, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Who Is Going To Save Rapunzel?

    Hiya AmayaStatham, I really like some of your expressions in this story. for example: Then you had two types of people who answered: You had the angry kind, ‘It’s 6 ...

    Dec 22, 2023
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: *****

    Hiya RavenAkuma, When I first finished reading your story, I wanted to write something, but at that time, I had just joined YWS and was still learning how to write ...

    Dec 21, 2023


I’ll paraphrase Thoreau here... Rather than love, than money, than faith, than fame, than fairness, give me truth.
— Christopher Johnson McCandless