NightWriter

like a stupid shopaholic?! Is a good repitition, as it is also alliteration. I can't say I agree with your theme, at all , but then, that's cause I'm a ...

This is an interesting analysis. You actually have a really unique touch upon it; one that explores it deeply. I've never thought about these movies in this way until now. ...

Hey UpandOut15, Yes. Let's be honest. It is a short chapter. A very short chapter. Short chapters, aren't totally shunned, though. Actually, I've come across many books that have irregular ...

I agree with Tgirly, that a couple synonyms would make a world of difference and improve your writing style so much. I have been known to be guilty of having ...

I always marvel at how people can sketch like that! How long did it take you? I didn't notice the head being off until I read about it, but then, ...

I read it, kind of thought about what I was going to say, looked down and Spinelli had already said it. I take my hat off to you both. There ...

Haha Jas, I love how you're so blunt. And I didn't really take offence, cause hey, I'm a story writer, not a poet. Just thought I'd give it a go! ...

Wow. I read this, re-read it and then just kind of looked at it for a bit. I'm in shock, I think. I can't believe you fit so much talent ...

That's cool Jess, and good luck with your finals!

Hey Dogs, This is totally a sympathy review, since you haven't had many ;) Haha - just kidding. Before I start, let me just aware you of one thing: (I'm ...

Hey TinyDancer, That poem was beautiful. Really, honestly, beautiful. It's so soft, and full of honesty. I love the story it tells, I love the fact that he's waiting for ...

That was incredible. Like, wow, SO incredible! Everything about that poem is perfect. Like, the emotive writing, the flow, everything. I love how it ends so simply, so acceptingly, "I ...

Thank you so much Rach, It's so helpful to get advice like that, and you've pointed out things, that to be honest, I didn't notice before. I'll probably be reviewing ...

Aw, thank you Sindhu98! It was my first poem in ages, so I was a little trepiditious about it, but thank you for your encouragment and I'm glad you enjoyed ...

I was lost in the city on April twenty-first, Lost in a jungle with not a mother, father or nurse. I cried for a little, and sat on my own, ...