Nikiller

Well I'm not usually one for these sorts of poems but I quite liked this one. I particularly liked the way you coupled the ideas of love and hate; stark ...

Good use of imagery and I like the build up of the semantic field of darkness at the beginning (it is said that this is an unconcious thing so you ...

I'm in agreement with everyone else here, although I do really like the concept of describing different emotional dispositions. Greatly lacking is a use of imagery: 'clueless' is perhaps the ...

Nice use of imagery but just a few things to comment on... Heart racing Adrenalin rushing Total excitement-- Perhaps a semi-colon after 'racing' and a colon after 'rushing' would make ...

I'm not great with love poems so I too found this one particularly over the top. The rhyme scheme is slightly erratic: you establish one at the beginning and then ...

I'm, not usually one for love poems, but this one sucked me in quite nicely. Lovely use of imagery here: As the golden sun sends pastel pinks across the sky ...

I personally quite like the vagueness, it forces the reader to formulate their own interpretation; I do agree with Vernon, in that you have to show rather than tell. Some ...

I'm in agreement with most, the idea isn't terribly original but the vines are a good image especially when it comes to restrictions in everyday life. Although I couldn't directly ...