Niraco

For some reason when I was reading the first chapter I totally forgot that the characters first name was mentioned. You wrote it that well that I didn't really care. ...

When I woke up this morning and realised I was the same person as I was yesterday; it disappointed me I always felt that an opening line is one of ...

I really loved the way your poem flowed so easily. I did not see any mistakes which made it all the more easy to read. For me this poem felt ...

Hello there Gravity! :) So I went into this poem not really having any idea what to expect. I did enjoy the poem but it was kind of hard to ...

Hello there CrystalCore. :D I'll be honest I didn't have high hopes when I read the title of this. I rolled my eyes believing that it was just going to ...

I did enjoy the structure of this poem and the subject matter has been done many times before but I still enjoyed it nevertheless. However I did find some mistakes ...

I tend not to read dark poetry so I was surprised that I liked this so much. Like the icannothearthings said there are some grammar mistakes. Such as: light,bleak There ...

This poem was beautifully sad and almost painful to read. I had a lump forming in my throat and everything. To lose these people when their lives had barely begun. ...

Hello there Rosan! I'm Niraco and I shall be giving you a review this fine day :) I quite like you opening line and how it already gives readers an ...

Hello Noelle! I really enjoyed reading this prologue. I found that your opening paragraph was very immersive, the opening line 'I am like you,' seemed very unusual and that is ...

Hello there NerdFighter! I really found you poem enjoyable. I liked that you started off with rhetorical questions then as the poem went you you tried to answer them. Your ...

This poem was enjoyable, the words flowed very nicely. 'For it caused your love for me to slowly fade.' I found this line beautifully painful to read. I did like ...

'Love is something that all little girls dream of. We dream of a handsome prince who will come and sweep us off our feet, and will protect us from the ...

When I first started reading I really liked your opening line and the fact that you used a question too. Very effective. Like Noelle said you need to have quotation ...