Noelle

Hi there! And even then he didn't know what that meant . S o I let my bones poke out of my skin and show how skinny I was and ...

Hi there! Yay! Another novel for me to read ^_^ Hm...I think the second 'Oh, silly you' is a bit overkill. It's already been mentioned in the first line. If ...

Hi there! I'm not a poetry person, but I do know a little something about poetry. So I'm going to take a look at this short little poem you've got ...

Hi there! As one the three men slashed Just a nitpick here. There should be a comma after the word 'one'. The woman fell to her knees convulsing as the ...

Hi there! Therese has already pointed out the nitpicks so I'm going to focus on everything else :) Had my parents scheduled a training session and not warned me? They ...

Hi there! Poetry isn't my strong point so I'm just here to give you a review of what I think of this overall. I'll be focusing more on the feel ...

Hi there! About time I got around to this, right? Sorry I've been a bit busy. But I'm here to review now! :D Immediately, the throne room began to slowly ...

Hi there! So, first thing I noticed when I first saw this was that the paragraphs are long. There are only three paragraphs in this entire chapter. Even shorter chapters ...

Hi there! Many rumors circulate about these rare and extraordinarily gifted men and women . and A t the darkest parts of night you can hear old men tell stories ...

Hi there! I find this a very interesting piece. It's under the category of poetry, yet it isn't in the same poetic form that I see other poetry in. As ...

Hi there! Just a quick nitpick here: Half tempted to just rip both legs off Her feet were just hurting a second ago. So wouldn't she want to rip her ...

Hi there! Before I start the review, I just want you to keep in mind that I haven't read Book 1. After reading this though, I think I'll go back ...

Hi there! My heart swells as I stare into his lovely, pale blue eyes. The s ide of his face is illuminated At this point I don't know who this ...

Hi there! Dad builds a sandcastle with seven-year-old Everly So you're writing this in first person. But this right here is written in third person. Now, I know it's a ...

Hi there! About time I got these reviews done, huh? So here we get to learn more about Ashley and her history. That's good seeing as we didn't really know ...