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I really do love this story! And thank you for not having any cellphone calls in this one! Even though you have a lot of work to do in term ...

I really do like this story a lot despite the MANY,MANY,MANY,MANY, mistakes here. It's fun to read but doesn't really serve any purpose here to tell you the truth. It ...

Good job on this! I really enjoyed reading this! And it sounds so professional! I liked the characters in the story, especially the MC! Spitting out bad words like a ...

This story was really funny. And I liked the POV you did. The nine-year old girl. To me me, this sounds almost like a children's book but the writing more ...

Um...this is dead scary to me...but very well written. It's a classic pouring out of emotions and feelings and descriptions and imagery. I see a lot of potential in you. ...

Fantastic! This was a really good character sketch! And I like Charlie...he's deep and has a lot of things going for him right now... You have some errors that I ...

Good job doing this! I wanted to read this because of all the NEW and DIFFERENT things in here! Being an author, your basic instinct should be to appeal to ...

Beautiful! I'm not going to make this long. 1. The stanzas were non-existent I think you should make this proper: She never stayed still  For long  She knew she had ...

Okay, aqua here to review. Keep thinking about the length of your poem because readers might not be that interested in it. I liked the cleanliness of the poem and ...

Sigh...Beautiful piece...I commend you. I absolutely loved this piece to tell you the truth. I didn't find anything wrong with it except for some spelling errors and some punctuation mistakes. ...

This was a really good piece of writing! I absolutely LOVED your use of descriptions and similes of sorts in this! Now...stanza by stanza, I will review this. "My name ...

Love Theory. First, capitalize your title. It's not necessary but still... Second, capitalize everything else. We lingered in the lamp-lit backseat. I esteemed myself his bohemian mistress of lust and

This was really good! The emotions just flowed out like...crazy! Even though rhyme scheme is practically non-existent, this didn't need it. At all. P.S Not being sarcastic. At all.

Woah. Deep. But you probably could have extended it more; made us really experience the hardships the MC faced through instead of giving us a slightly summarized type of story... ...

Okay, this piece is purely religious. Let me review, line by line... "Good Mothers Give Their Children Hope" Very true... And I like that you split that wonderful HOPE into ...