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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Am I

    I liked the concept of this poem, however the rhythm seemed off in a lot of stanzas. I would have like to see more of a connection in the second ...

    Aug 5, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Monsters

    I really enjoyed your poem. It flowed well. I looked at some of the corrections you recieved, and those were mine as well, so all I can say is apply ...

    Aug 5, 2010


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World