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Re: Culprit
That was great, even if it was kind of sad. It was very short but I still liked it. Keep writing because you're pretty good at it. Good luck. (Also, ...
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Re: Dressed with a Tie
Very long but very great. I really liked it but happier is better. I felt hooked from the beginning and never lost interest. I hope to read another piece by ...
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Re: You'll Find My Will Under The Bed
Umm, can I ask the purpose of writing this? From the title, I thought it'd be alot different. I guess that's what I get for judging a book by it's ...
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Re: I'm With This Boy
That was very good and I'm sorry your boyfriend was stupid enough to treat you wrong. No girl deserves that. The one thing I didn't like was that, if it's ...
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Re: I Know Something You Don't Know
It was really good and I liked how you repeated "I know something you don't know". It's definitly a lot like middle school and elementary school kids. I liked it ...
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Re: You know you love him.
I really liked it and I can say I can relate, but I'm only in 7th grade. I've had my own.... version of that I guess. Keep writing because you're ...
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Re: Mental Destruction
That is very dark but it was still very.... wow. I liked like very much as you can tell. You may want to go for a... brighter subject next time ...
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Re: Why Turn Away?
Your very true but its hard to trust people now adays because people lie and manipulate others. I wish life was without suffering but if there was no suffering, you'd ...
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Re: I'm A Jesus Freak
I really liked it and can relate because my closest friend is a Christian. She tells me all about Jesus and God and I believe too. You're completely right throughout ...
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Re: If I Had A Title For This It Would Be Up Here
The sarcasm in your title got me to look. I don't know why you have a survey asking for flaws because you first chapter was great. It was beyond detailed ...
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Re: Sky
I really liked it. It was very descriptive and had a lot of depth. I hope you stay interested in writing because you could be really achieved someday. Remember, writing ...
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Re: The Life She Wanted
Hi, I'm new to YWS and I saw the title of you poem and it really caught my attention. I liked it a lot and I think you did really ...
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Re: Inner Allure
Like branches of an oak. Skies of scarlet, turquoise, and a golden yellow. A sun of a mighty red and orange, entangled in the Twisting Love tree, captured divinely upon ...
Nov 29, 2011