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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: What I Don't Know: Introduction

    Here to review. This is a very good introduction. Already we can sense the danger, the trap that the main character is most likely getting into. This, especially, is maybe ...

    Mar 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: "Obsessions"

    Here to review. I would like to congratulate you on this poem, because it is very good, and I seem not to find any errors in it. I personally don't ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: The Triumph of These Tired Eyes

    Here to review. This is amazing. It is wonderfully written, and by the time I finished reading it I had to wait a second to get my bearings and write ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Dragon

    Here to review. I like this, for it is short and simple. However, I think you could make it a bit longer so we could get a better description of ...

    Mar 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: All Secrets Untold - Chapter One

    Here to review. I really liked this story. You did amazingly at setting the mood at the beginning, and the back-and-forth between the diary and the reality is very captivating ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sunday, March 1st, 2015

    Here to review. This is a good start for a novel (I am guessing this is the start of your novel). I like how you write about who you will ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Satire Re: The devil in you

    Here to review. I liked this poem. It has a nice flow to it that makes it easy to read and the message that you wanted to convey shows well ...

    Mar 22, 2015


The blood jet is poetry and there is no stopping it.
— Sylvia Plath