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Re: Battle part three
Well isn't this gruesome! I like it! I think this is a good idea that you should expand upon. I agree with you that you may have rushed it a ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Untitled - Chapter 1
Hello :) Here to review your work. This is a really interesting idea and I'm already eager to read more. I think your character development is great so far. We ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Grey Curtained Shadows....
Afternoon! & happy review day! I'm not a poet but I really enjoyed reading this! You could expand this into a short story or something its full of such powerful ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Secret World
Why oh why haven't you made this into a full on NOVEL? I'm a fantasy junkie and this is a really really good idea! I agree with Lycando in terms ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Things in the Deep - Prologue
Hello :) I really like the start of this story and I'm definitely interested in reading more! The first section definitely got my mind racing and asking myself a gazillion ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Only One
Afternoon :) & happy review day! I really like the way you introduce to Andy even though I had no idea he was a boy or a girl until someone ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Fallacy
AFTERNOON :) Thought I would return the favour and offer my review to this piece of fabulous work. I'm a science fiction junkie so I was more than happy to ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Just Feel
Hi there, I decided to randomly look for pieces of work that I could offer a review and I never expected to find something so personal. It's heart wrenching! I ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Laughing-Stock
WOW! I really didn't expect to be laughing out loud by the end of this...but I was! Especially through the lines; "My brother’s power is probably the best. He can ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Prophecy ch. 1-2 (edited)
Good morning & happy review day! I have read your prologue and these two chapters but ill just do both reviews in one! :) I really liked your idea behind ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Stakes and Dates {Chapter 4]
GOOD MORNING! So I've been reading all these chapters for a couple of days now and I'm literally addicted. I need chapter 5 in my life NOW! I love the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The girl behind that veil.
Good Morning & Happy Review Day! I agree with Hannah - nice name! I have never attempted to read an article/essay on here before so congrats on being my first ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Notice Me Lavvie
Hi again :) HAPPY REVIEW DAY! I saw that you wanted this reviewed on the message board so here I am to fulfill your dreams! Let me start by saying ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Heart Button 2: Part One
Good morning and happy review day :) I really liked your original heart button short story so I was really looking forward to reading this also. I like you writing ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Passenger: Chapter Two
Morning :) I was so excited to read this chapter as I enjoyed the first one so much! You didn't let me down! I love the way he can't decide ...
Jun 30, 2013