Oliverisorange

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Hello Stardust! I enjoyed reading this, found that it had a really good flow. There were a few awkward lines, but all in all, it was pretty good. I think ...

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Hello Stardust! I enjoyed reading this, found that it had a really good flow. There were a few awkward lines, but all in all, it was pretty good. I think ...

Hello Stardust! I enjoyed reading this, found that it had a really good flow. There were a few awkward lines, but all in all, it was pretty good. I think ...

This was very interesting and entertaining. I thoroghly enjoyed it.

Thank you for the review, it really means a lot! I'm glad that you did it stanza by stanza, it made things very easy. I will consider a lot of ...

Thank you for the review, it really means a lot! I'm glad that you did it stanza by stanza, it made things very easy. I will consider a lot of ...

Wow, thank you so much for the review. How could I make the stanza more important? Should I add another one before it to tie it in better? I still ...

But the writing is structured, it's a limerick

The scene was almost supposed to be an investigation, the woman was being questioned and I wanted to link the beginning to the end, I guess it was kind of ...

Thanks for the feedback :)

Wow, thank you so much!

Thank you for the review! I actually wrote this today during English class, we were given a picture prompt of a horse running towards a train and had 30 minutes ...

Hello! Haven't read a haiku that spoke to me in a very long time. I appreciate the simplicity and found that I was able to relate. This piece of poetry ...