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@dominusatramentum As a writer, you're supposed to know that words have power. Each word has an impact on the person you are addressing. It is no laughing matter. "Messed up" ...

Thank's Niki! However one point though, mortal parent. Just parent. The father or the mother is a god so yeah and isn't it easier just to tell me to flush ...

It's a great story, got me really interested! A couple of spelling mistakes here and there nothing a proof-read won't solve, so keep on writing !!

Wow!! I love this!! I really do! It's so original and I got convinced by what he said XD. Other than what Midnight and Pencilgirl said, there are no mistakes ...

Thanks guys a lot! I'll get on it!!!

Thanks a lot for the review guys I am editing my prologue right now!

Wow... I mean Wow! You describe everything so intensely it's a vivid living image in my mind!! I can't wait to read more!!

Well I am hooked that's all I know! Add a bit of descriptions to the characters just for the sake of the imagination of the reader and for the cottage. ...