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Ah, everything you say is appropriate, but I must say, I don't like to proof my work because I end up writing a whole nother story. I actually made this ...

Thank you for the reply and I hoe you like it. To be honest, while I was reading your comment, I was smiling to myself, because all of the points ...

This is the actual entire first chapter of my new book. Hope you enjoy! :)

Chapter 1 I glanced up from my staring of the last of the two suns set to see Calyme, Varome's shaman, the old leader. He was a tall strongly built ...

Here to review! Ok, first of all, I love this story, and I can tell it is going to be good. There are some parts that troubled me though. 1. ...

Oh, lol I have no idea how to do that but will do!

I love this story, absolutely love it. I have nothing to say but "wow" I like how you started it as a sort of flashback and then put it to ...

Okay, this is the second part of Chapter 1 that I decided not to put on there yet, here it is! :) Part II of Chapter 1 We walked out ...

Thank you for that info, sometimes I type too fast to see some of those mistakes that I do. I hope you forgive me for those grammar mistakes, I wrote ...

I really lover Harry Potter, so I can tell you some of my opinions. I kinda thought that you just replaced Harry's name with Neville and Ron's name with Harry ...

Here to review for you :) I don't know what to say about these paragraphs. I can't say that I was pulled in at the very beginning. It just seemed ...

Hello, I have been here for about three days and have two entries, Eternal Dragons in Fantasy and The Rebellion Series Part 1 in Science Fiction. Constructive Criticisim will be ...

I have never heard such details, it really grabbed my attention from the beginning. I like how you described the main character and his situation enough for the reader to ...

LOL if you don't wanna do a website, just do random stuff like sounding out random things or do something like throw a spoon down stairs and see what sounds ...

I like this story a lot, and I can tell that you are going to make more for it because of the name of the post :) One thing that ...