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Oh sorry if I didn't mention this before, but my main character, Nicolae, I actually meant for him to be a male :)

BTW: I will only post the second chapter if anyone wants me to, no use in putting effort into a useless story. :) It would be helpful if anyone would ...

Chapter 1 “Wake up, sunshine!” Lileame said as he entered my room. “The sun is up, and so should you, there is work to be done, you know.” “I know, ...

I cannot say much except that when you are doing a two-sided dialougue, you wann start a new paragraph each time the other person is talking. Makes it easier to ...

Thanks for the reply, it really helps. Really lol. Basically the reason why this isn't detailed very much is because I wrote this part about two years ago. Right now, ...

I love this scene right here! Reall gets the blood pumping. If you make this into a book, I have a feeling it will be great. I like how you ...

BTW: There is more to this chapter, and if you want me to put it on there then let me know :)

[*]This is my first time putting my stories on a site, so I ask you all to review and tell me if I should further this story, thank you[*] Chapter ...