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Also I want to note that your lit work folder for the series is out of order. For me, the next chapter is Chapter One, and then Chapter Twenty?

Makes sense! Excited to read more ^^

That's a lot of replies haha! I have heard that term be considered a slur before (or at the very least derogatory), so I wanted to caution you in using ...

Gotcha gotcha! I think it would be good to showcase Mireya's usefulness pretty soon/right away in this case, but I do not know what you have planned so >.>

hi this isn't a review whatsover, i was just imagining this being a suddenly gay story from the title >.>

sillllllv .> XD

hiii silv back after a long while to say that i have fixed the inconsistencies you pointed out and thank you once again for reading and reviewing

I shall have more notes later but the Viotta family is supposed to be Krieves, whoops >.> thought i got rid of all the mentions of the old name

Just letting you know but this chapter was not in my pdf XD i missed reading this and I quite enjoyed actually reading it because you'll see in my notes ...

He straightened his back, holding up a vial and ignoring her question. “I assume you’re familiar with 285?” Jerica nodded. “This is 285 mixed with an anti-inflammatory herb and a ...

no notes here! we're getting to good stuff :)

No notes here c:

Hiiii ty for the review!! So both you and winter talked about that line break -- that was actually just a line break from writing that I totally forgor to ...

Winteeeerrr

Winter