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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: London Bridge Prologue (*Revised*)

    Reise. I don't mean to gush, but I absolutely loved this! I read the review above mine and when I looked through I didn't see any of the mistakes she ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 'Rose'

    Hello Laura! Well I have to say I absolutely loved the description in this! It wasn't too overbearing but just enough that I knew what was happening. Congratulations to that. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It Had To Be Done

    Hello Cairo. This was pretty good, I only have a few little nit picks to point out. One: Fresh tears run down her face, burning her cheeks before evaporating into ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paradise; Lost

    This was absolutely amazing! I have no complaints at all. I'd like to think you're talking about chocolate or something of the like. It is also a bit unsettling because ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stars

    Hello Meighan. I really liked this. It was cute and short and the type of thing that gets stuck in you head. A riddle or a song verse. Like a ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mirror

    Hello icebender. Since the two people above me handled just about every mistake I noticed I will be content to simply leave my thoughts on the piece. For one, it ...

    Aug 10, 2011


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians