OokamiKitsune

Thank you for the help and comments. I thought there would be more problems with it because it is my first fight scene. I will go through it again and ...

I am in the process of writing a fictional, fantasy, mid-evil story with magic and I cannot get the fight scene right. If anyone has any thought about how I ...

Link : this is what i got when I went back through it. Von's eyes watched as the other squires and knights watched Max. Von had to admit he was ...

You are not crazy. I had to write a death scene for one of my favorite characters and it made me cry. I think it makes someone a better writer ...

Grammar is a very tricky thing and English is the hardest language to learn grammar in. In the following quote you wrote I have highlighted the errors you made and ...

Thanks for the pointers I will do some research and try and get a good since of what kinds of armor and weaponry would be better. Thanks a LOT

I am in the middle of my story and I cannot seem to get it sounding the way I want it to. The scene has two straight guys fighting- one ...

Hello there :? I was just curious so I clicked the link for this page. O and for your question it could be either National Traveler Women's Forum OR Neopian ...

My characters are mages. The girls are born with the ability to use magic-they were gifts from their deities.The guys can use magic but only if they create a contract ...

MC knows he is being looked for and hates them with all his breath- doesn't mind killing them. The MC and Protagonist are about equally matched. The protagonist that finds ...

I am writing a story on a young detective who is extremely smart and has a photo graphical memory, any ideas.

The protagonist is looking for the MC by orders of her higher ups. Your questions helped a lot by the way

My major is History. :D Some used horses but most citizens walked everywhere. Cars were around but not many people could afford them at the time.

You said he was kind of knightly figure for people, I would call him the Dark Ace of Hearts but that me. Riem ( I pronounce it R- (long) A- ...

A Urban Fantasy is really strange overall. First of all the word Urban means the characteristic of a city or town. And everyone knows what fantasy is 8) riiiighhhht So ...