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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Jesters (chapter 1)

    This was good! a really cool concept with original characters! all of the corrections were made by reviewers I'm not going to beat the moose (Yeah, i just made that ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A play of roses: Chapter 2

    Thank you!

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Play of Roses: Chapter 3

    tHANXXXXXXX

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Play of Roses

    Dude...thank you! you are like a god among men...When I saw that you reviewed my story I was like "Oh SH-"...hahaha. Thanks i'll make the edits when I have the ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A play of roses: Chapter 2

    Ok, thanks I'll edit when I have the time...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Forlorn

    This is really good. I came to the post with a skeptical attitude, but this is very well done. It is deep on several levels, and I found myself reading ...

    Sep 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Play of Roses

    ***

    Sep 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: A Play of Roses

    Yes I love a game of thrones! (Hence the title) Thanks for the advice...I posted this without proof reading at all (Yeah, I'm bad) So i'll be sure to proofread ...

    Sep 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Feathers in the wind

    Pretty good imo. I like it! perfectly all poetry should be. I'll be checking out your other postings....

    Sep 12, 2011


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