OriginofSymmetry

Wow, I like this a lot. Especially this bit: "The big illusion of happiness, In which she had covered him well, Deceived his big curious eyes." I love the first ...

This made me smile. A lot. I think that's because I can relate to it. I'm not as big a fan as you, but I am a rather big fan ...

Oh, I like this :) I like the title. It's very nice. It's simple and un-complicated, but I feel it fits in with the poem perfectly because of obvious reasons. ...

Oh, wow. This definitley makes me want to carry on. And I love the tension you create in the conversation. Interesting xD The thing I liked most about this was ...

Awh, they're in third grade! So, yeah, I'm not American, I have no idea how young they are (or not young), but from the way she narrates and speaks, I'm ...

I like this a lot. I like the characters. Victoria seems awesome. I always love characters who don't just sit there, I like them with a fire, confidence. I also ...

I really enjoyed this. I thought it had a good storyline and characters. Even though they weren't named or anything, I felt like the were there. I think all your ...

Wow this is awesome. You sure know how to make someone laugh. There isn't really much else to say, except it was hilarious and not much else. And it was ...

I really really really like this. You should definitley keep writing. And posting. The title drew me in. It's unusual, different. It isn't like other titles, it's got something that ...

OK, I'm new to YWS, so I don't know if this is the reviewing section, but this is my comment xD I've only read the first couple paragraphs, but I ...