Orinette

Really well done; it has a quick, springy rhythm to it that I really like, and your use of language is strong and lyrical. At the same time I must ...

Very cool use of the sphere, it was a strong image and worked really well as a metaphor. I really liked the minimal nature of your lines - very straightforward, ...

Very sad :( This reads as very heartfelt and I don't like critiquing poetry that comes from such a vulnerable place, but I'm going to do it anyways. The majority ...

Sweet and lovely and very romantic! You've done an exceptional job of capturing what it's like to fall in love as a teenager - the uncertainty, the fear, the delicate ...

This was just gorgeous. At first I was put off by the lack of quotation marks (one of my biggest literary pet peeves), but I liked your prose so I ...

First of all, I'm not a big fan of the right-alignment you've got going on -- I'm not too particular about formatting, usually, but that kind of bugged me as ...

Hey! I'm back for another review! :D I aplogize in advance for my nitpicky-ness, and for the fact that my review is freakishly long. I found out the next day ...

Hey, WaywardBird! Ok, I'm going to start with my very nitpicky critique, and then move on from there.... It was a midnight plague, placed upon us all by nature. It ...

Hi again, megsug! Mmm, I'm finding less and less to critique as I go on! A very good sign... ;) I really loved this installment. I adore your description of ...

Hi again, megsug! Mmm, another lovely instalment! I really like the way you set this up - though I'm not sure how crazy I am that the Masquerader's gender was ...

Hiya, megsug! First off - I really like this plot and can't wait to read more on that basis. Personally, I don't mind info-dumps in prologues as long as they ...

Hiya! Well, I usually start with the bad and then segway into the good, but most of my nitpicks were already picked up by Speele, so I won't go too ...

Hi again, and might I say, another job very well done! Okay, this time, I'm going to start with my criticisms... She didn’t look like she was waiting on or ...

Wow, this was truly fantastic! I love the way you write - you have a real knack for developing your atmosphere; your descriptions walk that treacherous tight-rope between offhand and ...

Hmm... very nice. Let me start off by saying that I am not a fan of short chapters. Not to critisize your choice of chapter length, or anything. I can ...