Otterpop

Spearmint, you're back! Definitely makes me happy, you are an awesome reviewer and have lots of great feedback! I didn't even think about the chapter length; I was just writing ...

Ahhhh, I gotcha! I assumed it was more of a suggestion and less a simple observation, my bad!

Hey Mailice! It's definitely been a while but I am glad you are still invested in my story, it means a lot; your reviews do help me out a lot. ...

Feel free to tag me when that time comes, of course!

Blake's emotional journey/change is definitely important for this story and despite the circumstances with the story and the emotions at the forefront of this chapter, I am happy that it ...

No need to apologize Spear! I am just glad to hear you still have an interest in reading/reviewing my chapters! Leaving behind little clues at a time is definitely something ...

You're welcome for the reviews! It really was a pleasure to read through, and hope you keep on writing, you do have a very nice writing style and story/characters!

I had a feeling there was plenty of context I was missing! Still, I was able to grasp a fair amount of information despite that which I think is helpful ...

And thanks for the feedback! Hope you keep on reading it too!

Hey Lim! Thanks a lot for the review! You do make a lot of good points regarding some of the squeezed-in nature of some sentences as well as some dialogue-related ...

Glad you seemed to "enjoy"? (for lack of a better term) the suspense and tension of the chapter. You can always read previous chapters to get some more background information ...

I mean, it could be related just a smidge, whether in reference to the character or me or just anything in general, it's definitely good advice. (though personally I wish ...

I'm glad you came back around to the first chapter, and with plenty of feedback, advice, and analyses! I would definitely agree in that this is likely something of a ...

I do love readers/reviewers like yourself who take an interest in some of the smaller details of the story. It especially helps when you consider ideas/concepts/writing styles that I had ...

Thanks so much for the compliments, and the couple of suggestions! You make some good points, and I like the idea of editing a couple of your ideas into the ...