Overwatchful

Hello, Overwatchful here for a quick review! I wish I had found this work earlier! It was very good. You're writing skills are impressive, and I am looking forward to ...

Hey! Overwatchful here for a quick review! I think you did a pretty good job with this first chapter! You set up the story well, and it left me looking ...

Hey dragonight9! Overwatchful here to leave a quick review! I think that you did a pretty good job with this story. The premise is interesting, and I would love if ...

Hey, Overwatchful here to drop a review on this! This was an amazing read! It is very well written, and carries a great message. Your writing is both literal and ...

Hello, Overwatchful here! I just read up on this story, and you're doing a really good job! I can see the improvement from chapter to chapter! And I'm here to ...

Hello, Overwatchful here! You've got a nice start to your story here! I like all the names you have for things, like "skool" and "shmillion." They give a fun feel ...

Hello, Overwatchful here! This is a good start to your story! Your descriptions are very pretty, and I definitely can picture the things you're describing. I can't wait for the ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a great start to what I think will be a great story! Except for a few things that I'm going to point out and (hopefully) ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I was looking around in the Green Room for something to review, and I saw the two most recent chapters of your story, so I though I'd ...

Hey, Stormblessed here! This was an amazing story, and I have loved being able to review it for you! I'm sad that it's over, but I will definitely be giving ...

Hey, I'm here! (Gotta hurry so you're not waiting on me lol.) I really do hope this isn't the last chapter, because I can't settle for an ending like this. ...

Hey, I'm here! I don't have the words. I really hope me and Starlit aren't the only ones keeping up with this story, because this is amazing! We're so close ...

Hey, Stormblessed here. . . ... I don't really know what to say. I mean, I knew that this story would not end happily, but still. This is going to ...

Hey, Stormblessed here! Another great chapter! It's hard to write post-death scenes, because the individuals' reactions are so varied. The grief is there, inside, but it doesn't real, so you ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Oh boy. Wow. That- that was quite a turnaround. You definitely had me feeling this. I really have no criticisms. This was an amazing chapter, and I ...