Pacific_Sky14

Wow, that is so good! The story is very moving and understanding! ~Skyy.

I rated! I think it looks cute! :] With th elittle xoxo at the bottom left. the hair is pretty cool how it flows to spread around the floor. You ...

I like how it ties up. Although, it sounded a bit rough, I can't quite pick the words out. Overall it was fantastic. One word that bugged me because it ...

I rated! :] I think this goes better within the lyric poetry genre. This is a beautifully written song. I really like the last lines! To get this moved to ...

This is a sweet poem! It sounds incomplete but the chorus and first verse are great!!! Keep writing 'cause this song can use some more of your talented mind. I ...

To your post previous, it sounds a bit rushed, I don't know. Oh, but I love this short story! Although, it does seem a bit cliched and unrealistic, just a ...

Thanks! :] ~Skyy.

*Hugs* Hey Grant, what's up? I'm kind of into fantasy as well. That's cool. You should know that a bunch of people on here are random, such as me. hehehh.. ...

Now that you mention it, I spotted about twenty more tihngs wrong with it. Let's play I SPY.! *Huggles* *Runs off*

Is there anything that i need to do to improve this? Please rate/review/critique. It means so much to hear your opinions! Oh, yea I love you! hehee :D

"Like timid dormice your hands retreated into their sleevesaway from winters chill bite as I sucked the last dregs of life" That was my favorite line!!! Although, dreamy was right, ...

Aww, so romantic! Ooh chills running down my spine boy. That was really good! No, it was fantastic. Where did you learn to write like that? Wow, I bet if ...

Alrightyy, I luurrrve it overall, :] Here's the review, One: The hair is cool looking how it curls in and looks real. Two: The eyes are too slanted. Three: The ...

Wow, spectacularrr! :) The hair is really good. The shading in it too. That's pretty nice for drawing from almost side view. I think it's cute and I like the ...

I dont know, Whelp, I lllove it! You used great technique and shading. I really like the hair. The image itself looks a bit blurry especially the hair. THe mouth ...