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Pako

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Once Upon a Time

    Hi! Pako here I'll try to review this poem.. This is great I like the idea, I like the structure but one thing I found some rhyming scheme in the ...

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Star Crossed Love

    Hi! Pako here I'll try to review this poem for you. I like this poem, because I like poems with great rhymes specially in English. I'm not that fluent in ...

    Oct 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Stars

    Hi! It's Pako I'll try to review this poem for you. All in all you have a good poem but what bothers me is the spacing its kinda making me ...

    Oct 4, 2013


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites