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Re: Once Upon a Time
Hi! Pako here I'll try to review this poem.. This is great I like the idea, I like the structure but one thing I found some rhyming scheme in the ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: The Star Crossed Love
Hi! Pako here I'll try to review this poem for you. I like this poem, because I like poems with great rhymes specially in English. I'm not that fluent in ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: Stars
Hi! It's Pako I'll try to review this poem for you. All in all you have a good poem but what bothers me is the spacing its kinda making me ...
Oct 4, 2013