Palantalid

BBB, I'm starting to like this, and like Jabber, I like the second ending better. A suggestion: "Oh my gosh. I just related my life to food. That’s all I ...

This was a wonderful peice, Ted, I mean Ed :wink: Unfortunately I just don't get many of the references as I've never read Plath or Hughes. I only know the ...

I owe you this, at least..... Rickety thing this, but it has some really thought provoking lines. It makes me think of a world of different scenarios and possible poems. ...

Well Kit did get the most important points but I just had to tell you that the poem had a distinct feeling of movement, it had the energy of flowing ...

All right, I'm going to take a guess. There were a lot of lines I tried too swallow but I ended up licking them and putting them back on the ...

Alright, I've read it so far and I think the voice is great. Omnipresent? The second account was from Annabelle's point of veiw wasn't it? And yes, I think the ...

Adrian, that was a very enjoyable read. Just a priliminary suggestion- the lines are a bit tedious and i almost missed that it rhymed altogether. So, in case you have ...

Just wanted to pull your attention to the verse: "Death came swiftly that Midsummer's night; I doubt such a young girl could put up much a fight." The last line ...

I have no idea whether this is a serious story or not but if those tweaks of humor were intentional then i have nothing to complain about. in fact i ...

forgive me if i'm wrong, but doesn't 'to cross the Rubicon' mean to put all to stake and just carry on....or something like that. well, i had forgotten the phrase ...

brilliant, i liked this very much. there were a few things that i didn't quite get- or more specifically, who's the yes man and is the use of yes 'men' ...

Hmmm.....i haven't read your poetry before, so i don't know whether this was an intended effect, a subconscious one or maybe an idea that just pops in random heads at ...

nice job, neat job........i presume there will be a continuatuon. it's a shame this hasn't received any reveiws so far. i'd say the theme was great, and i hope to ...

i dont know whether honest star is a person or idea or erm.. never mind i dont know but the flow and the whole poem was really well written. the ...