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Re: For When They Cry
well, guess what, i decided to pop back and things have more ways then revision. i read it a couple of more times and voila i saw the sneeky genius ...
Nov 7, 2007 -
Re: One Last Dance
Kitty15 thanks for the critique. it really helpful. the part about pace increasing, i think that was the most useful. i'll use it for sure though i'm not sure whether ...
Oct 3, 2007