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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Books

    I whole heartedly agree with your poem. Books do everything you say and so much more. I can really relate to this poem because this is how books are for ...

    Jun 17, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: deleted

    I really really like these lyrics. I would love to actually hear the music put to this song. Your lyrics strike the emotions and can be very relatable to many ...

    Jun 17, 2012
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Citrus Sky (Sunset Melody)

    Ahh these are great lyrics. I can hear a melody to these lyrics already. : ) I would love to hear this on the radio or something sometime. : ) ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: La Curandera's Instructions: Act 2

    This is really quite interesting. It feels very magical. I can see this being a poem big time. : ) Ahhh the beginning is so descriptive in the comparison of ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Butterfly

    This poem is so beautiful and so sad. The great thing about this poem is that a lot of people can relate to the bullying that she went through. You ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: It Will Hurt

    This poem is very deep. I can feel the speakers pain. The pain in this poem is properly and well portrayed. Very good with this poem. I really like it. ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Gift To You

    Hi there, I enjoyed your poem. : ) There is a lot of love in this poem. And I am such a sucker for love. A couple of things. The ...

    Jun 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Andromeda

    I really enjoy the allusion. This poem has such a deep meaning to it also. Very well done. I do not quite grasp the structure of the poem, but that ...

    Jun 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Jane

    This is really cool. : ) I like the thought you put into it and reminds me of a combo of Tim Burton and Edgar Allen Poe. The meter it ...

    Jun 14, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Lilly

    I had a dog named Lilly. This is such a beautiful heart felt poem. A perfect example of why we we can give a voice to our emotions and a ...

    Jun 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Tainted Roses

    Your poem is very beautiful and your figurative language is captivating. The figurative language in this poem is a parallel to the visualization. They go hand in hand yet opposite. ...

    Jun 11, 2012


"I love you as certain dark things are to be loved, in secret, between the shadow and the soul."
— Pablo Neruda