Panikos

Thank you for the review! I'm not personally a Christian, so I took some creative liberties with the idea of what demonic possession might feel like. I'm glad you thought ...

Thanks for the review! I did kind of want this piece to be a bit ambiguous as to whether the demon was real or a product of psychosis, so I'm ...

Thank you :) I wasn't sure about the 'for the millionth time' bit. The repetition was deliberately done for emphasis, but I wasn't sure if it worked when I wrote ...

Thank you! This is a really helpful review :)

It did occur to me that maybe Sylvie's motivations were different to my predictions, but I'm glad the reviews are helping! :D

I'm glad it helped! (Yeah, I had the same problem on one of my works a few weeks back. I don't know why it does it.)

Thank you! This is really helpful. As for why Luke is oddly quiet in the 'I'm fine' bit - I actually wanted to have the implication that he and Alan ...

I'm glad it was useful! :)

Ooh, I'm excited now!

Thank you :)

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Glad it helped! ^.^

Yep, this is much better! I love the argument about the article; it gives me a way better insight into Adam's character. One tiny thing I did notice was this ...

Ahh right, that but about the accent makes sense. Looking forward to the next bit!