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Paradise555

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Heart

    This was nice, I did like it and I know haiku's are suppose to be in the form that you have created. But it was a little bland and you ...

    Jun 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Best friend

    I did like this poem. But maybe you could try to have some stanzas instead of every line being on it's own. And some figurative language would be nice. Like ...

    Jun 20, 2008


Be happy, my friend; and if you obey me in this one request, remain satisfied that nothing on earth will have the power to interrupt my tranquility.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein