PassionForAPen

Ah yay, I edited it and it worked, :D

Thanks but, I already had that done and for some reason when I submitted it it did not come up that way. Thanks for taking your time to read it ...

I know its short... and kinda random, But for some reason i really love this, Its simple and it gets to the point. Its quite beautiful, :)

Thanks for the comments, I appreciate them all, And calling it a love poem i would have to disagree and say its more of a heartbreak poem. :P

I really liked this, I think you have a talent thats only going to get better, & I look forward to seeing what else you put up, :)

It is very beautiful, I adore the intensity of it.

Thank you, This is the first thing ive put up on here apart from an introduction about myself in the About The Authors forum, So im happy people like this, ...

Oh my goodness... This was beautiful, :)

Thank you very much, :)