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That was fantastic! I love the mystery surrounding the boy and that you didn't explain why he was walking in the first place, at least not outright, so there is ...

Wow. Just... wow. I was hanging on every word, completely engrossed in the story. It was like I was not even in the room anymore, but standing next to her, ...

I have to say that was a good kids' story. The only critique I have is that if you are going to have some of it rhyming, then you should ...

Wow. This was an amazing piece of poetry. I loved the repitition of 'I wish' and the questions in between. I loved that it had very steay rhythm while still ...

That was extremely truthful, and I can't agree more. Women today are seen by most- I can't say everyone- as sexual objects. Violence is running rampant and we need to ...

Let me just start out by saying that I loved this story. I am a big fan of post- apocaliptic sci-fi, and I love well written post-apocalypic sci-fi. This is ...

Wow. Just... wow. I loved the imagery that this gives, the message, is wonderful. I completely understand the shackle of society and think that it is a great choice of ...

I can absolutely relate to this. I have quit many a novel and even a screenplay because I had no idea what was going to happen. Generally what I do ...

Hola. Me gusta la poema, pero la fue un poco dramatica por me. Yo sentio que esta a veces pero me no gusta que dramatica lo fue. Yo amo la ...

Me gusta tu poema tambien. La fue simple pero la fue muy interesante y conmovedor. Me gustala mucha. Yo estoy de acuerdo completo con la poema y que la dice. ...

That's very intersting. I'm certainly intised to keep reading, and very intregued. While this work may need a little tweaking, you have artfully given away just enough information to intise ...

I loved this! I really like comedic poetry, or rants. I actually wrote a similar poem to this which was entitled "I Hate Algebra", which ironically, I wrote in math ...

That was very interesting. I really liked the repitition in it, it really drives in the thoughts and feelings of the author. It's almost like a synopsis, but filled with ...

That was great! I honestly love punk music, and listen to it all the time. I thought that the poem completely described and examined what punk music really is. The ...

I find this poem very interesting. For a while, I myself was a self-proclaimed Atheist. However, you are also insinuating that ALL scientists are Athiest, which is not true. Honestly, ...