PenguinAttack

LOTR for teh win! Hp is not in the same league.

You're all wondefully amazing legends for criting this for me! And I *heart* each and every one of you ^.^ I am going to think very seriously about all you ...

I have nought but love for you both for the crits ^.^ You're all legends and I thank you muchly as every comment is appreciated and I love that you ...

Thankyou, my loves, for those fab comments ^.^ I'm glad that this little poem had any sort of impact. I fixed the typo, and you were right about the "made" ...

Hehe Thanks Fan ^.^ I have changed that one bit, you were right, it sounds better like that. Thanks for the commentation, all is welcome ^.^ *Hearts* Le Penguin.

U=U=U=Up Dated! hehehe, please enjoy the fixed - up version ^.^ *Hearts*

Thanks a stack Suzanne, Cade and Ele ^.^ All of your comments are appreciated and well loved ehhe. I especially appreciate both of the in-depth commentations. They are most appreciated, ...

Thankyou both oh-so-much for the commentations! I completely understand LizzyG ^.^ I, myself, am not a fan of rhyming. this was - to being with- an attempt at a tercet,for ...

Hehe thanks ^.^

^.^ Thank you dear :D You should never be ashamed of your own work! Lol; I am a hypocrite and a half ehehe. Thankyou once more! *Hearts* Le Penguin

Most gratuitous thanks to you all for the commentation ^.^ The whore means what it seems to mean ;) It is an indication of the kind of betrayal that has ...

*blush* ohh Lizzy, hehe. ^.^ Thankyou all for your commentations, I shall be working on this piece as soon as I can... I have hopeful plans for extending it. All ...

Hehe, of course your crti was helpful, all crits and comments are. As well as being monumentally appreciated that is :D I agree about the sentance thing, one whole sentace ...

Hehe, thankyou muchly for the commentation, I actually noticed both of those problems mere moments ago, before I read your comment, but thankyou so very much for pointing them out ...

A Lovely poem! Really Really lovely. While I do agree that some of the rhyming was forced I still think this was a wonderful poem. Good imagery and description, with ...