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  • Fantasy Novels Re: God of the Underworld: Chapter 1: (revised)

    When I woke up in the morning, I thought it was just another ordinary day. You know, wake up, eat breakfast, go to school, get picked on all day, and ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Nightshine - chapter 1 (revised)

    I. NITPICKS "The first day of school." I said quietly to myself with a sense of dread . My name is Louis Nightshine. I'm your typical 13 year old eighth ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: What bands/artists are your favorite?

    Feist Kate Nash Imogen Heap/Frou Frou Bitter:Sweet Nightmare of You Regina Spektor Ingrid Michaelson MIKA Norah Jones Corinne Bailey Rae Well, I like those because they sound nice? Lately I've ...

    May 3, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Shiner

    Pinata: Hahaa....thanks. Robin: That's a really interesting diagram. Thanks! Thanks for everything else, too. JFW: Very helpful. I didn't even realize my sentences were that long. You can tell I'm ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: The Humor of Sanctum

    You have encountered Overbearing Mother which lunges at you with 9pm Curfew! Hahaha...makes me laugh.

    May 3, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: To Do with Music

    Bright colours flash before my eyes; a thousand smells overwhelm my nose; vivid tastes assault my tongue; and the sounds – the sounds are like a million choirs; the chorus ...

    May 3, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Character Names

    I like normal names. I don't really get into the whole match the personality to the name or Japanese-inspired names. I just like normal (maybe older sounding names like Eleanor, ...

    May 2, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: I'm here to Help

    Hey there! Can I have a review for "The Shiner"? Thanks if you do!

    May 1, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: locked

    I. NITPICKS “Eighteen, shouldn’t you be in school then? It’s Thursday night!” I replied. I’d always been a rule-abiding child and teenager. There wasn’t much to complain about when I ...

    May 1, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Straw Dog

    Review for a Review! I. NITPICKS The way his head slammed against the wall shook the two onlookers. It cracked loudly but he didn’t acknowledge the pain. That’s what scared ...

    May 1, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Shiner

    The hot summer day had turned us into popsicles - two frozen treats sitting side-by-side, excreting sticky perspiration in the way that only forgotten dreamsicles could. And, just like popsicles, ...

    Apr 30, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Austrian Girl Sexually Abused for 24 years

    We talked about that in Global Studies (though I knew about it because I read the thread yesterday). It's so sad. Apparently Fritzl is on suicide watch now:

    Apr 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: vampire to the death... ch. 1

    seems you added more. :) Sataru froze. Sentri found her neck... the hairs on the back of her neck stood up and her heart beat quickened.He surprised her by kissing ...

    Apr 29, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Reflections, Chapter 1

    I. NITPICKS I’m wasn't sure what the time was as I headed down the dark streets. It must have been late. Admittedly, I was a little drunk. That’s why I ...

    Apr 29, 2008
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Nightshine - chapter 1

    I. Showing vs. Telling THE FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL. I thought to myself with a sense of dread . My name is Louis Nightshine. I'm your typical 13 year old ...

    Apr 29, 2008


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