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Periwinkle

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Reason (part one)

    I'm the first reviewer! Yay? Anyways...I liked your story but it's a bit rough. You change POV and tense a couple of times and you do a lot of telling ...

    Mar 2, 2008


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