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(5) . Jim can no longer act like the child he once was now that he knows the pain of losing his parents and, as a consequence, the pain of ...

Well now it looks awesome! It took a while to kick in on my computer. I take back what I said. P.S. I use Firefox.

I think writing someone with a lisp for a long period of time would be frustrating to the reader and the writer, though, haha. You could mention a few times ...

Hmm, my best advice is not to make the character itself ridiculous or stereotypical. Give it a personality that isn't supposed to be laughed at because of the lisp. Also ...

Ehh. The buttons are all blurry/pixelly now (at least on my comp), and they seem a bit smaller than before. And it looks like there's text on the top of ...

I need to know everything you know about Canada. Please. Especially if you live/lived there or could tell me about life in Canada. I'm working on a horror story set ...

I read these books in January/February, and I'm obsessed with them. However, many aspects of the series bother and infuriate me. Especially Bella. My issues with Bella: My major issue ...

The weekend before Halloween, two of my friends at this other college hosted a pumpkin carving party. Everyone cooked something in the two friend's kitchen and nibbled on the food ...

For my 555th post here (and with an even 60 reviews..), I decided to finally post something I wrote! This is the first chapter of my NaNoWriMo, that's the only ...

XDDDDD lol, that's great!

I live in the south. Snow doesn't favour us. At least, not until some random day in February. Plus, I'm in college now so the likelihood of a snow day ...

Tomorrow, at 8:30 a.m., is my exam of utter d00m-nation. DX It's a class that's like a cross of Intro to Philosophy and Intro to World Religions with some science ...

This is a good beginning. It's partially well written and kept me interested. You use a lot of passive voice and need to work a bit more on your sentence ...

He sank into his vintage arm chair. Red in color it was a gift from his late father. He sank into his red vintage arm chair, a gift from his ...

And the first part of the movie, up until they introduce Lee Scoresby and Iorek, was majorly rushed. Yeah, I noticed that, too. When Pan suspected that Mrs. Coulter was ...