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Perviguana

  • Art & Photography Re: music love hart

    Hey, Pervy here. I just want you to know that this is really nice. You really managed well on the lines, and the proportions of the notes were excellent. It's ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Soulless [Main Character]

    Hey everyone! This is the "raw" idea for the main character of my novel "Soulless". Hope you like it, check out the novel if interested ;) (feel free to rip ...

    Jan 21, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: We never were

    Hey, Pervy here. I really liked this story, i'm quite sure almost everyone have had a similar situation at a certain moment of their lives (or yet to experience it?). ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Break-in

    Hey, it's Pervy here. This story was good and you described the events well. It just left me wondering that the average man would beat the s*it out of you ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Homemade Devil

    Hey, Pervy here. Onto the review: You might be using the word "you" too much in the first and last part. It sounds pretty blunt when you read it out ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Soulless [Chapter 1, review please]

    [Supposed to be in the novels section, sorry.] Could someone please tell me their opinion about it, so I can decide on continuing it or not =) The concept of ...

    Jan 12, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Love Birds

    Hey! These are really cool! You really have a unique style of drawing, and it's working really splendedly for you. Yes, they are definately in love :3, they seem to ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A short story: Bartolome

    Hey, Pervy here. I noticed at the first glimpse that the work is full of spelling errors, but don't fret! Start each word in a title with a capital letter. ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Serenity [Main Character For Novel]

    Hey, thanks for the comments! It's not that she doesn't have round features, but her shirt is raggy. She's a witch so that's the explanation for the hair ^^.I suppose ...

    Jan 10, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Serenity [Main Character For Novel]

    So this is the sketch of the main character for my upcoming novel, Serenity's Lore. She's the apprentice of a wizard, incase you're interested.[This is the first time ever that ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Casting shadows

    Hey, Pervy here. This poem was good, first I tried guessing a bat, until I continued reading and found out that it's white, has hollow eyes and circles the moon. ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Passing Time

    Hey, Pervy here. I have to admit that poems aren't really my expertise, but I can tell apart the "good" and "bad" ones. This one falls into the category of ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Nobles and Beggars *Part 1*

    Hey there lad, Pervy here. I enjoyed reading this, you described the characters and their actions splendedly, and I got a good idea of the scenery as well. Onto the ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Darkness In London [Chapter 1, Edited]

    This is the first chapter to another random 5am story, enjoy! A Bargain With The Devil [1879, London] Aelfric Ellwood, a 5 foot chubby man with a handlebar moustache, puffed ...

    Jan 8, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: My Heart.

    Happy that y'all like it. Yeah she was really happy ^^ (I added a small text to it in addition). Apparently my thumbs bend like that? XD Yeah I'm weird. ...

    Jan 8, 2011


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien