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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Serena, the Colours, and the Death

    Okay, that was a pretty good! So a few tips. 1. Check your grammar properly, you'll find quite a few mistakes in there. 2. Pacing is good, but it's slightly ...

    Oct 21, 2015


The bird that would soar above the level plain of tradition and prejudice must have strong wings. It is a sad spectacle to see the weaklings bruised, exhausted, fluttering back to earth.
— Kate Chopin, The Awakening